Monday, March 31, 2014

Week 2 Corrections


Week 2 corrections

And I sometimes play food volleyball with my friends.

Incorrect use of a conjunction.

I sometimes play foot volleyball with my friends.

I think the best way to keep fit is not eat too much. So if i were hungry, i didn't eat too much.

Form   to + not + base form

I think the best way to keep fit is to not eat too much

if I were hungry           conditionals  not real but possible

If I were hungry, I wouldn’t eat too much.

Incorrect use of a conjunction.

I like playing basketball, so I play a basketball with my friends at weekend.

Play basketball

Exercise is a great way to keep fit. I always do fifty push ups and I play table tennis 2 times a week. I run when I feel good. I sometimes play badminton with my friends at the courts near my apartment

Good job!

I sometimes walking and go jogging at night.

Missing verb.\

Go walking

I usually eat rice, eat fruit.

I usually eat rice and fruit.

I usually eat rice and I eat fruit.

Actually, I seldom exercise and play sports.

Seldom, rarely, barely, scarcely

Nice job!!!

I often stretch muscles of legs.

I often stretch my leg muscles.

In fact, I do seldom excercise for keep fit regularly. It doesn't mean 'I don't like excercise'. I just do excercise for fun.

To keep fit

Word order

I seldom do exercise

I wake up every morning and 30 minutes in the morning and exercise before going to push up the habit of more than 10 times also use the stairs instead of using the elevator and walk to the nearest distance.

Don’t use Google Translate!!!!!

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