Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea
There location. I live there.
There is
There are existence
Buyeo is not very famous.
Buyeo is a very important
place in history.
Buyeo was a capital of
Bakjae.
There are so many tourist
attractions.
I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic
point. because There has international airport and harbor
In + a city I grew up in Incheon.
Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to
speak in English to someone.
introvert, it
is hard
If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just
tell me!
Form wants to
Wanna not standard spelling, can be found in internet chatrooms and text
messages
I want to play soccer.
Standard
pronunciation “wanna”
My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash
decision. But, ironically it is demerit
that i have a lot of things on my mind.
Incorrect use of a
conjunction
Capitalize the pronoun I
Ironically, it is a demerit
that I have a lot of things on my mind.
And my another Hobby, computer games.
Missing verb (is)
Playing computer games
Hobby doesn’t need to be
capitalized
Incorrect use of a
conjunction
Wrong word another
My other hobby
I like suddenattack so much that i played
all day long last year. So i couldn`t
studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
Sudden Attack
Capitalize the pronoun I
Incorrect use of a
conjunction (2)
aren`t you think so too?
Don’t you think so too?
Don’t you like it too?
Tag questions ask for
agreement.
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’.
So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
Incorrect use of a
conjunction.
My doesn’t need to be
capitalized.
Form when the subject is third person
singular (that), base form + s or es
My favorite movie is ‘Dead
Poets Society,’ so my motto is ‘carpe diem.’
That means seize the day.
I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a
state called Gwangju.
Some country names use “THE.” The United States, the United Kingdom of
Great Britain, the Republic of Korea,
the Philippines.
I’m from South Korea.
Capitalize the names of
countries.
I grew up in a state called Gwangju.
Wrong word state
city
When I get diet, I do some exercise (
jogging etc ).
Wrong word get diet
Go on a diet
( jogging etc ).
Like = for example
When I go on a diet, I do
some exercise, like jogging.
At this time, I loose weight and my body
get more healtier.
Wrong word loose (opposite of tight)
lose
my body get
form third person singular subject + base form +
s or es
form of a
comparative healthier
I lose weight and my body
gets healthier.
When the opportunity, i wants to do boxing
later.
When the opportunity
Missing subject, missing
verb
When I get the
opportunity,
i wants to do boxing later.
Capitalize I
Form first person singular subject + base form
I want to do boxing
later.
How to be healthy, first, I evenly eat a
lot of food.
How to be healthy
How to be healthy? Rhetorical question.
Don’t ask rhetorical
questions.
I evenly eat a lot of food.
Wrong word evenly
I don’t understand what
this means.
I should exercise every day, because These
days Increased my body weight.
These and Increased don’t
need to be capitalized.
These days Increased my body weight
these days I am gaining
weight.
Jogging and push ups on the night
Get up early in the morning.
To ride a school bus
Eat slowly,eat evenly
Jogging and push ups on the night
Missing subject , missing
verb
I go jogging and I do
push ups at night.
Get up early in the morning.
Missing subject
I get up early in the
morning to ride the school bus.
Eat slowly,eat evenly
Missing subjects.
I eat slowly. I eat evenly.
Meaning?
I like every exercise and activity! so I`m
enough healthy
! exclamation point. Goes at the end of a sentence.
I`m enough healthy
Word order
Enough + noun I always get enough sleep.
Adjective + enough I’m healthy enough.
I don't now why that deleted. Sorry to
Proffessor So Now I replay to write assingment.
Know
Professor
replay to write
rewrite
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