corrections week 1

Evening class corrections.  Week  1

 

I'm freshman.

I'm a freshman.          Singular form of a countable noun.   Articles, a, an, the.

 

I have 4 family except me.

There are five people in my family including me.

 

My hobby is too many.

Too many = negative meaning

So = emphasis

So + many + countable nouns

So+ much + non countable nouns

So + adjective

I have so many hobbies.

 

My habit is biting my nails. So my nails so short.

                                                            Missing verb (are)

FANBOYS    for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so

Conjunctions – join two sentences.

My habit is biting my nails so my nails are so short.

 

My family members are parents, younger sister and me.

I have parents and a younger sister.

 

I'm 21 years old, sophomore in Koreatech.

I'm 21 years old and I am a sophomore at Koreatech.

 

I'm smoker. I know smoking is harmful. But i can't stop because of toxication.

I'm a smoker. I know smoking is harmful, but I can’t stop because I’m addicted to nicotine.

My family is consisted of me, mother, father, and one older brother.

I have parents and an older brother.

 

I don't well english. Because i'm korean it’s no wonder. But i want to well english. So i will endeavor in jason's class and talk to many foreigners.

I don't  speak English well . Because I'm korean it’s no wonder.  I want to speak English well so I will endeavor in Jason’s class and talk to many foreigners.

 

I'm 21 years olds.  And I live in Cheonan.

I'm 21 years old and I live in Cheonan.

 

i'm a sophmore in koreatech and my majors in mechatronics control system. therefore i interest in green enery.

I'm a sophmore at Koreatech and I major in mechatronics control system, therefore I’m interested in green energy.

 

I major in\

My major is /

 

my hometown is Daegu. But now i am living in studio apartment near my university.

My hometown is Daegu, but now I am living in a studio apartment near my university.

 

I major Mechatronics digital system. and I`m junior.

I major in  Mechatronics digital system, and I`m a junior.

 

And I grew up in a Incheon. There are big and famous airport name of Incheon International Airport.And there are beautiful canal with cycle track. So if you want to go on trip using bicycle, you must passing there

I grew up in Incheon.

you must passing there         location

location or existence?

There are big and famous airport

There is + singular, non countable

There are + plural

There is a big and famous airport

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea.  There is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown.There is very important place in history. There was a capital of Bakjae. There is so many tourist attraction.

I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point. because There has international airport and harbor

Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak in English to someone.

If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!

My merit is that I am prudent.  Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision.  But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of things on my mind.

And my another Hobby, computer games.

I like suddenattack so much that i played all day long last year.  So i couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?

My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.

I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a state called Gwangju.

 

 

 

 

I'm excited to hear this class.

Wrong meaning

Hear vs listen

Attend a class\ take a class/ join a class / participate in a class

Listen to a lecture

 

 

 

Gwangju is famous of delicious dish.

Wrong preposition

Famous for

 

I`m very happy to meet all of you and I wanna be with you closely.

Wrong meaning

To be with you?????         To be in a romantic relationship.

I want to be close with all of you.

To be close with someone = to be good friends

 

Rice is mainly eaten in the cafeteria.

Wrong meaning

I mainly eat my meals in the cafeteria.

 

Of course I played with them soccer, football and so on.

Word order

I played soccer, football and so on with them.

 

Let's get along with together this semester.

No object, preposition

 

Let's get along with each other this semester.

 

This semester I live in.

Word order

Hanul dormitory

 

I grew up in Cheonan, Cheonan spent all of my school days.

I grew up in Cheonan.  I spent all of my school days in Cheonan.

 

Summer vacation is approaching the future, I plan to go on a trip with friends.

Run-on sentence

Summer vacation is approaching.  I plan to go on a trip with friends.

 

I'm not good at English. so I'm afraid english but well I want to english.

I'm not good at English, so I'm afraid of English but I want  to speak English well.

 

Above all, Byungcheon doesn't have anything to play with, so I can't tell you about it.  Though I can't go outside to play, I'm fine that I'm making friends here.

Wrong word

To hang out

 

Here is a great place to live because as you know people are kindness and mindful.

Form

Adjective   -    kind

 

I'm pleased you are my professor and expect next monday.

Wrong word   expect  

To look forward to

I'm pleased you are my professor and I’m looking forward to next Monday.\

If you want to see my play come to our performance

If you want to see me play the guitar come to our performance